Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

 After the screening of the preliminary exercises in class, you need to create a blogpost called 'Preliminary exercise learner response' and embed your video from YouTube. Then, complete the following tasks as your feedback and learner response:

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW:

-Use of shots

-Pan

-Zoom out of shoe

-Authentic concept

-Follows Goodwins concept

EBI:

-No text

-Needs some industry context in it

-More locations

-Different costumes

-Need some lipsyncing

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

WWW-Concept,range of shots,Use of Goodwins music video concept

EBI-Lipsyncing,Industry contexts and use of more locations

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I completeed it to an extent.However I believe that I didn't produce it up to the standard of how my statement of intent explains it.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

I have learnt to make sure i include a range of locations,industry contexts and text to make my music video stand out.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

I will make sure to include more locations,text on the screen and lipsyncing