Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Ratings:

1) Research (through the presentation AND your blog - make sure it is posted before you present):5/5
2) Coursework concept:5/5
3) Language: terminology and theory:5/5
4) Representations / social and cultural contexts:5/5
5) Audience and Industry / digital convergence:4/5
6) Presentation delivery:4/5

WWW:

-good intro

-logo design

-well designed slides

-good body slides

-hand gestures 

-eye contact and moving around

-idea of montages,zooms in and out,close ups 

-good use of media language such as mise-en-scene and typography

-uses of theories such as reception theory(stuart hall),feminism(van zoonen),male gaze(mulvy)

EBI:

-add one more paragraph to statement of intent 

-avoid using full sentences in slides

-make sure i can read all slides in time duration and not pause inbetween 

-should have added a conclusion

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW:

-Presentation

-Delivery such as hand gestures and eye contact

-Concept of the drink

-Website design was clearly layed out

-Use of media language

-Use of representations 

EBI:

-Add one more paragraph to statement of intent 

-Make sure to read slides in time duration

-Conclusion

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

My presentation will lead into my actual coursework because i have already researched and created an idea of my three tiktok treatments which helps because i have an idea of how to start creating my tiktok videos.I have updated my statement of intent by adding another paragraph to it so that it will meet the needs of 500 words and i do believe my concept has enough clarity in it.I think it is very appropriate for the brief as i know and believe many people like watermelon drinks.It is very achievable because all the resources i need in the tiltok i can buy and the settings are a house and a park which are easy locations.Furthermore when updating my statement of intent i had added more media terminology in order to get higher marks.