Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner response

 1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full.

WWW-

-good cinemetography

-good editing

-right location

-appropriate clothing

-good performance

EBI-

-digetic sound-ambient noise

-no sound track

2) Type up a summary of the feedback you have had from the rest of the class - bullet points is fine.

Neev:

WWW-

-good script remembering

-good cuts

-good camera angles

-good facial expressions

-good actor placement

-good setting

EBI-

-audio levels

Tara:

WWW-acting is good,setting,lighting,planning,camera angles

EBI-Sound track

Jasneet

WWW-good acting,good performance,good audio,appropriate setting

Kaye

WWW-

-good planning

-good cuts/shots/angles

-good acting/facial expressions

-good use of props

-setting is accurate

-good costume

EBI-

-soundtrack

-ambient noise

Lea:

WWW-

-good camera angles

-good props

-well edited

EBI-

-clear audio

Ramla:

WWW-

-good acting

-good shots

-good setting

EBI-

-lighting dark at the beginning

-noisy

-no soundtrack

Maya:

WWW-

-variety of shots

-clear talking

-use of props

EBI:

-unclear videoing due to clash

Jaspreet:

WWW-

-camera shots

-facial expressions

-body language

-props

-setting

EBI:

-sound

Dhurata:

WWW-good script and clamps planning,good facial expressions,setting is accurate,good camera angles

EBI-sound was a bit dodgy at parts but its ok

Sanjivani:

WWW-

-good acting

-good setting/lighting

-cinematogrophy on point

-good use of props

-good audio

-cloting

EBI-

-soundtrack

alezay

WWW-

-good script

-good acting

-good camera shots

EBI-

-background noise

-quality

3) Use all the feedback you've been given to write your own self-assessment of your video using WWW (What Went Well) and EBI (Even Better If...)

WWW-good cinematography,good editing,good use of clamps

EBI-soundrack-ambient noise

4) Now reflect on your own work in more detail. How did your planning (script, shot list) help clarify and develop your ideas?

I think that my planning helpt me a lot especially my script.This is because it helped me accurately recreate the scene,furthermore my planning made sure i could effectively get my recreation up and running in time for the deadline

5) Thinking technically, how could you improve your work for future videos? (E.g. filming, editing, audio levels etc.)

I feel like some of my clips were very choppy and did not go together.Furthermore I think that my soundtrack was not very good.In the future i will fix all these things in order to have an effective video.

6) Finally, what have you learned regarding the importance of mise-en-scene in film and television? Write a paragraph to answer this.

In this recreation i have learnt that it takes a lot of time and effort to be able to make a film recreation.Costume:Even if it is not fully accurate atleast wear similar colours in order to help the recreation.Lighting-make sure it is perfect.Actors-facial expressions play a crutial role in recreation.Having them being accurate helps to emphasise recreation.Props and setting both have a very important role and if they are not accurate they ruin ur whole video.Overall mise-en-scene is very important because it makes your videos feel much more accurate.